Wednesday, February 27, 2013
blogger response 4
food is an artistic pleasure to me simply because it is some many things that a seasons chef or just an ordinary cook can do with food :such as preparing flavorful dishes,soups sauces,and marinades for grilling or baking,or just setting up a buffet meal.After all every household needs a good cook.
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Melvin,
ReplyDeleteThe directions are to do an entire paragraph; I assume you ran out of time?
There is one comma error:
1. After all every household needs... (the comma goes after 'all')
I would most certainly argue that the colon after food should also be a comma and should read: "with food, such as...." A comma is a better option under normal circumstances, and the only reason I don't count it as an error here is because of the complexity of that sentence (so many commas needed) demands other punctuation for it to read more coherently.
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